Last night I finished teaching my first adult education class, “Writing the Personal Essay.” The six-week class met for two hours on Thursday nights at Lexington High School in Massachusetts. Because this was my first time teaching in the Lexington Community Education program, I was lucky that enough students signed up for the class to run.
We started with four students — four intelligent, interested women who wanted to write — but after three classes, one unfortunately had to drop out after she injured herself in a fall (I think she’s OK). So the three remaining students and I soldiered on, meeting every week to discuss reading assignments, do writing exercises, and workshop student work. We talked about things like fragmented essays, narrative voice, lyric essays, and craft technique. Each student brought something special to the room. One was a patent attorney and the mother of two young children, one was a writer in an MFA program who teaches her own adult ed classes in another community, and one was a woman from China who has lived in the U.S. for eight years and who, after pursuing a career as an editor in China, is interested in writing in English (if she can find the time while raising her three young children!).
I want to thank each of these women for taking a gamble on a new teacher and putting their trust in me. Writing can be a very vulnerable thing, especially when you’re writing creative nonfiction. It’s a brave soul who puts herself out there and says, “I’m not only going to write…I’m going to let someone read what I write!”
I ended the class by reading the first paragraph of an essay titled “Essay, Dresses, and Fish” by Sandra Swinburne that is included in Short Takes, an anthology of short essays edited by Judith Kitchen. The paragraph reads this way:
“For decades I believed that being ordinary precludes good writing, so I refrained. All the while, there was essay, modest and dignified and waiting to be noticed. Essay welcomes the ordinary, knowing that there are big things — true things — nestled within the small and familiar. Essay counts on the notion that good writing comes from good thinking from ordinary people on ordinary subjects. In some ways, it seems a simple thing.”
As I send my first students back out into the world with whatever knowledge I could give them about craft techniques and essay writing, I hope they know that in my book, each one of them is extraordinary.






Hi Faye,
I just saw this entry. I think those students were lucky to have a wise teacher such as you. I hope you’ll be teaching more classes. We didn’t talk about that at coffee, but maybe we can talk about it at our next one. I enjoyed this blog entry, especially what you say about the simple things in our lives being important. It is in the personal that the reader finds the universal. You can write about big subjects like war, but still, if the story is not personal, all you have is an an encyclopedia entry. Or I guess in today’s terms, a Wikipedia entry. You, yourself, write some of the finest personal essays around and the subjects are at once simple and very complex.
Thanks also for listing my blog in your blog roll. When I figure out how to do that in WordPress, I will list yours, of course! See you soon.
Faye, thanks for you kind thoughts about us! I very much enjoyed being in your class and learned so much about how little I really knew about essays! I put “The Fourth Genre” on my Christmas list, and have been at least consistently jotting all my story ideas down, to expand on them over the holidays into some more fully fleshed out pieces. What I realize about the class is that I do enjoy having my work heard and commented on, and what a luxury to be able to do it in such a supportive, intimate environment as your class!
Best regards and Happy Holidays
Marianne Downing (the “patent attorney” from your
It is great to hear from you, Marianne! I am so glad to know that you enjoyed the class. Please feel free to stay in touch.